Writing Music: Smoky Girl

No, I’m not going to mention they forgot an e.

You know what works in songs?  Repeating words.  Sing it with me!

Smoky girl Smoky girl Smoky girl Smoky girl
Girl Smoky girl Smoky girl Smoky girl
Girl Smoky girl Smoky girl Smoky girl Smoky girl
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You know what doesn’t work in writing? Repeating words.

PSA:  While editing, cull that manuscript for over used words.

Song: SMOKY GIRL
Group: MBLAQ

Are there any other lessons to learn from this song/video?
What are your “over used words?”
What’s your favorite song that over repeats words?

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